Tuesday, 27 October 2009

My Literature Review

Our days seems to be a easier life decade, most of everything is very easy to get it, and a hard life decade at same time. With a job well paid it is possible to get some few goods nowadays, without a job people are called as a loser(students may not be included, because of advantages and disadvantages of ones and others). That´s why is said the time is changed, from a 50 years back.

Nowadays there are a lot of distraction, parties, technologies such as games, computer devices, mobiles phones, more channels...; even looking in a way those good are very essential in some part but as in life there is negative and positive points for everything people has in the world.
More than 50 years ago to get to know the news, it was only by radio and television, to make a call or to arrange a dinner or appointment it was and it is possible by landlines phones, but since the new generation start to develop the quality of our lives with better cars, television with High Definition, better radios, new kind of instruments, better music songs, clothes, even styles - hair, tattoos, watches...; a mobile phone was emerges, at beginning and until now people still like this new toy, it is exciting to get a Nokia with 5.o mega pixels of camera in it, the same happen with some other brands, Sony Ericson's, Apple, Samsung, now even more it is possible to have a windows on our mobile with windows mobile.
Those new toys have a negative and positive effects on our society. It is good for some parents to know where those pumpkins are and if there is any security from them to relax, it is good also if there is any problem at all to call any emergency, when a friend or a girlfriend/boyfriend can contact where ever it is, good features such as camera with good quality picture, video recorder, radio, internet and games, for the positive effect.
For negative effects stuck on your phone for long hours - addition, sometimes letting the speak by the side, losing the communication skills where everything must be by the phone text, change the own health system, teens would spend everything on the phones, obsessive calling and texting, disrespectful for the society and distraction.
There are many cases of teens crashing car's because of mobile phones distraction, which disrespect the societal norms.
Mobiles were made to make our life easier, where it turn to be a very important tool of our daily life system(to be connected to friend and family members - 24 hours, and business opportunities) but in same time turn to be a easy path to lose the concentration not just for adolescent but for adults as well as brain cancer, epileptic seizures or sleep disorder at minimal stage.

1 comments:

Jo Bowman said...

There is not one single reference in this piece of writing - so this is not a literature review. You need to cite in the text to back up what you are saying - otherwise it is entirely your opinion, which counts for nothing without evidence to confirm its authenticity.
The literature should be written like this:
Smith 2009 argues that students are often late to lectures due to the excesses of alcohol, however Jones 2008 states that most students cannot wake up until midday due to a natural hormonal anomaly and this is why they are tardy. He also mentions that due to this, all lectures should take place in the afternoon and cites Haden 2003 and his interesting insight into student sleep patterns to evidence this. Morgan 2008 notes that some individuals are either "early birds or night owls", and many students follow this pattern. Those people who favour early rising are very often exhausted by mid afternoon, whereas late risers can produce their best work after midnight (Wright 2009).
You have now completed the PDP element of the module and have gained your 10% mark

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